A sometime Saturday, I’ll drop the leather bag,
Drop the books and clocks and things,
Look down with tinted eyes and know
I didn’t turn these lights off.
I didn’t wander to this house.
I didn’t come here empty.
I forgot the emotion but the feelings still linger.
There will be many Saturdays
To pretend it might be raining.
Some day, I’ll build up all my energy
And take it back.
i feel great intensity here.. its fast yet gradual and that's what i like here.. good going.. looking forward to reading more of you.
ReplyDeleteyeah, there was a lot going on in my head at this moment but i'm glad it came together. thank you for reading!
ReplyDeleteI like this, especially the line "I didn't come here empty". Very nice.
ReplyDelete"I forgot the emotion but the feelings still linger"
ReplyDeleteI felt this so many times. I can so relate. You have a wonderful way with words that I can understand. Beautiful.
thanks so much!
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