Thursday, September 2, 2010

okay, i lied

since i decided i will most probably minor in creative writing, i'm now taking creative writing. i may have lied about the lack of posting in the near future, but we'll see. anyway, today was the first day so here are some thoughts i worked on digesting (awkward disgusting mix of bodily functions?). sorry. okay.

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Black hard shadow of a wall draping and sneaking around me and it's all straight lines straight faces straight buzzing above me behind me and an open window with a draft of wind and words that erupt in scribbling shock from darkly clad people in their putrid yellow metal chairs but not yellow of the sun but yellow of something dark as well and they look down look away erase and taste their places.

A furied piece of person with my hands and hair rips away the solemn metal of the iron chair so that the desk cracks down into the dirty pores of the carpet and she flings the yellow seat up high through the slivered window so that it makes lightening erupt in the sky where it has now become the sun and the girl laughs at her own power, the shivering of her fingertips and she sees the yellow chair mingling with the clouds and it is suddenly the sun, she did it and it's a bright yellow fiery blaring hard chunky piece of art.


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coarsely ripening rain fingers through the spaces in the leaves and you want his fingers to touch you and break your skin.
but it hurts and you don't know why
and suddenly you smell the musty smell of your grandmother's home but it's only the clouds
because they're ancient and watching you!

1 comment:

  1. Whoa... single lines without commas or full stops spanning the lengths of paragraphs... Creative writing huh?

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